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  • take control back

    MARCH 7, 2009, 12:13 pm

    Song Title: Shattered Glass
    The Story:

    FAN VIDEO CONCEPT: shattered glass

    By Britney.com user actionacton

    theme: a bar, a woman , her man kissing some other girl

    Scene one
    Britney Walks towards a bar , wearing cowboy boots and stirrups, as she opens the door she sees her man kissing another/then flash to black and britney dancing while
    Shattered glass rains around her.

    Scene two :
    Britney dancing on frozen lake….when she suddenly notices her man under the ice…
    He struggling to break through ice…britney starts running , then looks back as it starts raining shattered glass…she dances , shot of ice shattering and guy jumping up for air.

    She then turns , looks at him , then takes her boot and shatters the frozen lake again and boyfriend falls back into lake as she walks away.

    By jja de bruyn

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  • eternity

    on britney poem
    March 7, 2009 - 11:54am — actionacton

    Love is not eternal, it fades away with time
    and life takes what it gives , no regrets nor consolation
    Leaving behind empty human shells to dwell
    in the nothingness of life as a ocean of tears swell

    We see, bur we are blind
    to the hurt we hide inside
    We hear, but we are deaf
    to the cries of others neglect
    We are together, yet we are alone
    because we choose to complain not grow

    Yes we try to hide our feelings
    Yes we try to hide out pain
    but the sorrow knows no boundries
    So let us open our minds to new reign
    which would cleanse our hearts and make us see
    that we are not alone
    as long as we keep dreaming, hope
    can survive

    jja de bruyn

  • Ice cold betrayal

    MARCH 6, 2009, 4:26 pm

    Song Title: Shattered Glass
    The Story:

    A girl, walking into a cave, winter outside. Inside all is frozen icicles hanging from the cieling. she turns and looks into a reflection on wall of ice, and sees her man cheating. Then shatered glass icicles start falling around her as she dances on a iced lake dance floor. her boyfriend under the ice trying to break free. she keeps walking then stops , lake cracks and ex jumps up. she stops, looks turns, and he falls back into icey cold water.
    jja de bruyn
    acton_d@yahoo.com

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