2nd mission for the spy
Global Fan Fiction Contest Finalist!
Posted by B-ADDICTED
FEBRUARY 15, 2009, 3:13 pm
Song Title: Radar
The Story:
My "Radar" scenario would be a sequel to "Break The Ice". After exploding the building in her "Break The Ice" video, Britney takes a car and arrives in a harbor. While the song starts, she enters a luxurious ship. Then she sees that special sexy guy walking in front of her. She goes in her cabin and starts dressing up with a sexy outfit.
When she says "I don't think you know", Britney checks her "radar", which localizes people, and starts following the man she saw when she entered the boat. The chorus starts and Britney searches all the cabins to find him. No success. For the 2nd verse, Britney thinks she found him on the deck and starts chatting up with him but then, during the chorus, she realizes that it's not him. 4 girls arrive and push him in the sea. Britney and her girls start dancing but then, she perceives the guy entering the boat. Britney runs and tries to follow him. She arrives in a big living room where everyone, who is dressed up like rich people, looks at her.
During the chorus, Britney climbs on a table where people were eating, throws everything that was on the table and dances. Once again, she perceives the man. She follows him again and enters in the cabin of the captain who is actually dead on the floor. She takes the man, hooks him on a chair with ropes. Then, she murmurs in his ear the following line "I got my eye on you and I can't let you get away". Britney dances again and starts getting crazy for the last chorus. She destroys everything including the machine which controls the boat. The boat starts moving weirdly and starts sinking. Britney run outside the boat, followed by security guards while we hear the "ta ta ta ta ta".
During the last radar sounds, Britney hangs on a rope which is hooked on an helicopter. Britney finally disappears in the sky while the boat is sinking. Mission complete for Britney, the spy.
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Comments for this Global Fan Fiction
Awesome
This story was really cool. I loved how you made it a sequel to "Break the Ice." I'm a finalist to and if I don't make it, I'm definitly routin' you on. Cuz B-Addicted, I got my eye on you...and I can't let you get away. He he. Well, good luck.
P.S. Check out my story, "Come to Life...and Dance" for "Mannequin."
P.S.S. Did you see Britney in concert? I saw her in Newark, Jersey....SPECTACULAR!
Hmm
This Submission Resembles mine..
A Lot!
Just Love it!
OMG!
THIS HAVE TO BE A VIDEO!
This is so Great! i mean the boat and the part '' I got my eye on you''
ITS Crazy!
ITs hot!
ITs Britney b****!;p'
I SUPPOSE IT'S A LIVE ACTION SEQUEL... ISN'T IT?
I mean... not another animated video? probably it should begin the same way as Break the Ice finishes and as Brit jumps the cartoon becames the real brit...
***SINCE BREAK THE ICE IS THE ANIMATED VERSION OF TOXIC... THE SEQUEL SHOULD AVOID TO RESEMBLE TOXIC ONCE AGAIN
COME TO LIFE AND DANCE IS THE BEST STORY OF ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've already commented on it and voted!
you really know how to capture the real brit's essence in a video
WELL DONE
I LIKE IT BUT PLEASE NOT ANIMATED AGAIN. IM KINDA OF TIRED WITH CARTONS LOL¡¡¡ THIS IS GONNA BE GREAT BY BRITNEY HERSELF DANCING AND ALL¡¡¡
GREAT!
This story is too cool!!! I hope you win!!!!!!!! Anyway i'd prefer if they choose to make a real video, no animated... and i'd like they use this story! IT'S WONDERFUL!
What?!
What?!
Are you kidding me?!
I didnt know that this would become a ''animated'' video?!
Like a cartoon?!
PLEEEEASE Don't!!!
Im beggin you guys!
This song and this story deserve BRITNEY FOr Reall!
Goooood
This should be the one to win
Just one word (PERFECT)
From the 36 projects, your the best one for sure
You got my vote man on this one
5 STARS
Hope you win and give the place where Radar belongs, AS A SINGLE
Ps. Would be really cool if Jive would you this idea for a REAL LIVE VIDEO
Thanks
Thanks everyone for supporting my story, I'm glad y'all are enjoying what I wrote =)
I really took hours to write this. Even if I don't win, I'm happy that people commented my story.
By the way, Xreye007, I'm sorry that your story hasn't been accepted but I would be really interested in reading it. If you could send it to me, it would be really cool. Thanks.
zOMG
PURFEKSHUN
I GOT MY EYE ON YOUR XTORY
That was brilliant dude, hope you win this s*** and kick everyones butt lol
Serious you did a great job, it has alot of imagination and it's original from every screen you did it
Beside, if you think you won't win that make no sence, you got the best one and also the best rate of all the xtorys
Nº1 Place is for you, good luck
=)
Aw that's very nice, thank's a lot. I really appreciate your comments =)
IT'S PERFECT!
RADAR must be single... and its video should have this story! It's too perfect...
you have a great imagination... you're Great!!!!
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This is a great story, but I don't understand how did you go over 250 word limit ? ):
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it doesn't matter if he went a little bit over the limit... the important thing is the story and the story is fantastic... the only one that deserves to win... you're the BEST!!!!!!
OH MY GOD!! RADAR NEXT SINGLE
i got to say that first t wanted "unusual you" as 4th single, but reading this STORY! IT WILL BE AMAZING, RADAR IS SO ADDICTED!!! "UNUSUAL YOU CAN WAIT", BUT HAS TO BE A SINGLE TOO BECUASE IT"S AMAZING TOO,
SO RADAR 4TH SINGLE
UNUASUAL YOU 5TH SINGLE
AND AS A LOT OF PEOPLE LIKES "KILL THE LIGHTS" COULD BE 6TH SINGLE OR SHATERED GLASS!!
THIS ALBUM HAS TO HAVE AT LEAST 6 SINGLES ! AMAZING
RADAR 4TH SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i dont think so
1st i think if the contest had rules, why the rules dont care right now????
2nd... why a video of radar? radar was a song included on blackout... why blackout its so present in the circus era??? including the tour, the album, and now the fan fiction...
OH MY GOD!! RADAR NEXT SINGLE
AH, I FORGOT, THIS HAS TO BE A REAL VIDEO NOT AN ANIMATED ONE!!
EVERYBODY WANTS A REAL VIDEO, SO PLEASE BRITNEY.COM! LISTEN TO FANS!
ONE MORE THING, PLEASE INCLUDE GIMME MORE IN THE TOUR BUT NOT AS AN INTERLUDE, WE WANT TO SEE BRITNEY IN THIS AMAZING SONG!!!
First of all, Radar is a BIG HIT!
It doesn't matter if Radar was in Blackout... this is a thing that only us fans know...
Radar is a powerful hit more than other Circus's songs... and it deserves to be single... it has been wasted once, don't let it be wasted a second time...
this song has an incredible power and we have let the whole world know it...
Remember that it has been said as "the perfect pop song that everyone would have in their album"... SO DON'T WASTE IT AGAIN!
Radar
In my opinion, Radar would be a big hit. It doesn't matter if it was on Blackout or not, since Blackout wasn't a big success, a lot of people don't know the song. And I actually agree that it's way more powerful than half of the album.
Oh and I'm sorry if I wrote more than 250 words, I didn't even notice =/
ca m'a fait rire ....made me laugh
hm
Could you explain, please ?
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Well I'm sure if other people went over the limit, their story would be great too. It gives an unfair advantage to some if they went "a little" over the limit. You had to find a way to fit everything in 250 words :'(
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Do we make you laugh? So Laugh!
everyone thinks as he wants... and if you don't think as us, it's your matter. We respect all opinions, so respect our please! For us Radar is a great song and it always will be...
if you think differently explain your opinion without attack the others, thanks!
Just understand it, ''RADAR HAS TO BE A SINGLE!''
OMG!
I can't believe that there are A lot of Stupid people anoying us with ''oh, but radar is from Blackout, it can't be the 4th single''
This is so ridiculous, open up youre f******* minds and understand that this is the perfect time to realese ''radar'' as a single!
What is the matter with you guys?!
This song and this Story are the best!
And just another thing...
Do you really think that this story are good because it has more than 250 words?!
I don't think so!
If The story were just the first paragraph of what it is now...
I would preferer this short paragraph than the other 35 storys!
Puttin' a big boat in a videoclip is an inovation for Britney music videos!
Can't you see it?!;C'
Concluding...
Radar deserves to be a single, Radar deserves a musicvideo like this story(with the real Britney please;X') but It doesn't deserve people with those stupids comments about the song!
;D'
Take it easy
luis Paes
Take it easy man, we are exchanging some opinions but not being agresive at all... so plis calm down.
By the way, I think the same, the story doesnt change with 250 words, or 300... however i think ppl who are saying this, is not cuz the story would change but cuz it were "rules" that wasnt fulfilled... beyond there is no best or worst story... do you understand???
You are talking of other thing...
Maybe youre right with radar being a good single but first of all... the song that'll win this contest NOT BE A SINGLE, so... which is your problem dude?... you freak it me out.
and second, i understand radar is a cool song, but there's lot cool songs in circus too... so...
thats my opinion, and please dont say ofensive words to ppl who thinks different
thanks
Yep!;p'
aushaushausha!
I'm really sorry about it!
I know that this contest is not about which song is gonna be the next single!
But i think that people are saying that the song just CAN"T be the next one!
It makes me sad, because radar is a perfect song!
I totally respect the decision for other songs!
But saying unfair things about radar isnt correct! ;C'
Hey, I really freaked out huh?!
aushaushaushaushaus!
sorry man!;D'
AWWESOMEEEE
Perfect!
I loved the idea!
I wish u to win!
Great job B-addicted
Loved the story. Think Brit as a spy would make a great vid. I had Brit in James Bond / Vampire theme for Unusual You which didn't get picked unfortunately. My 'Kill the Lights' entry made it, which ironically I didn't think was as good, but there you go. I went with the more personal 'struggle within' theme for that one - Tortured soul within, struggling to find herself, torn between work and play, needing paps to ‘work’, yearning for freedom to just ’ be’. Growing up, compromise, can work and play but need to find the right balance and not give in to excess. Sounded good at the time, but I'm an action fan at heart and your theme of Brit as a spy rocks and is the best iIve read by far. Well done.
Wooow
I really loved this story!!
hope it wins!
good luck!!
=)
Thanks y'all <3
about the 250 words
I really enjoyed the challenge of telling a good story in 250 words. It really wasn't easy.
My first outline nearly had 300 words and that was just the outline. Narrowing a story down to 250 required omitting a lot of details I really wanted to add. But the requirement being 250 made it easier to get to the point and prevent any need to stall my way to the conclusion. It was so much fun to write. I hope I get another opportunity like this. Best wishes to the finalists.